Feedback for Kate:
good plan and research overall
I like the new room that you made and the software you used
it definitely shows your progression route
Should change the background to you progression route
Should add the major project on the website
Feedback For Santiago:
make the logos more approachable
Make the gallery related to your project but you can keep the photos but in a different tab
Managed to do some good research
Feedback For Sujin:
It looks so aesthetically pleasing
Titles are a bit hard to reead, can you please change the font
looks simple and clean
good grasp of research
but there is a lack of examples of drawings and reflection.
Feedback For Nathan:
Simple
The texts are a bit small Make them more visible
both of the blog and the website show your progression route
I like the digital drawing of your first major project
Feedback For Jaewan:
make the posts more interesting its kind of confusing
should add more reflection an commentary
put introduction to the work of the major project
Feedback For Angel:
good grasp of research a lot of information
looks nice and simple
Amazing choice of music and simple website
add some commentary on the pieces.
Feedback For Jason:
the words are hard to read
the green on the blog is hard to read and on the eye add
Thank you Khalid
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