Thursday, 17 November 2016

Feedback For Students

Feedback for Kate:


good plan and research overall

I like the new room that you made  and the software you used

it definitely shows your progression route

Should change the background to you progression route

Should add the major project on the website

Feedback For Santiago:

make the logos more approachable

Make the gallery related to your project but you can keep the photos but in a different tab

Managed to do some good research

Feedback For Sujin:

It looks so aesthetically pleasing

Titles are a bit hard to reead, can you please change the font

looks simple and clean

good grasp of research

but there is a lack of examples of drawings and reflection.

Feedback For Nathan:

Simple

The texts are a bit small Make them more visible
 both of the blog and the website show your progression route

I like the digital drawing of your first major project

Feedback For Jaewan:

make the posts more interesting its kind of confusing

should add more reflection an commentary

put introduction to the work of the major project

Feedback For Angel:

good grasp of research a lot of information

looks nice and simple

Amazing choice of music and simple website

add some commentary on the pieces.

Feedback For Jason:

the words are hard to read

the green on the blog is hard to read and on the eye add


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